Why choose The Final Girl?


(Especially when The Other Girl costs less?)

I don’t edit every genre under the sun.

I specialize in thriller, suspense, mystery, and psychological fiction because those genres demand a very specific kind of editorial instinct.

I know when a twist is being set up beautifully — and when your reader figured it out fifty pages ago.

I know when the tension is tightening exactly the way it should, when the pacing is starting to drag, when a character’s behavior stops making sense, and when a reveal is genuinely jaw-dropping instead of simply unexpected.

I've spent my time learning the genre you're writing in. I know the conventions, the reader expectations, the traps, the clichés, and exactly when breaking the rules makes the story better.

That's the advantage. That’s why you choose me.

Not ready for a full edit yet?

Start where you are. We can always go deeper later.

You don’t have to hand over your entire manuscript (or your entire budget) to get expert eyes on your story.

Start smaller.

  • The Final Girl Sampler — $80
    Up to 5,000 words. See exactly how I edit before committing to a full manuscript.

  • The Opening Statement — $250
    A deep dive into your first chapter or first 50 pages to make sure your opening actually hooks.

  • The Full Forensics Report — $650
    A full-manuscript critique with detailed editorial direction, without the cost of a full developmental edit.

  • Not sure which one you need? See the full Pricing & Services menu