THE FINAL GIRL

Pricing & Services Guide

The Final Girl survives every plot hole threatening your story.

Editing & Author Services — Thriller / Suspense / Psychological Fiction

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Why I Price The Way I Do

This isn't a menu of hours — it's a map of what actually moves your manuscript forward.

  1. 01You're paying for outcomes, not markup. I bring genre-specific insight, structural precision, and an obsessive attention to detail that ensures your book delivers the emotional punch your readers expect.
  2. 02I'm a specialist, not a generalist. I work almost exclusively in suspense, thriller, and psychological fiction — I know the beats, tropes, and pacing that keep readers hooked.
  3. 03I protect your voice while elevating your craft. Plenty of editors can “fix” a manuscript. Fewer can refine it without erasing what makes it yours.
  4. 04The hidden work is built in. Every project includes prep, research, style-sheet creation, and follow-up — plus the mental load of holding your entire story in my head.
  5. 05I price to protect us both. My rates are set so I can give your project the time and focus it deserves without rushing or overloading.
  6. 06Transparent and consistent. You'll always know exactly what's included, what it costs, and why.

Editing & Manuscript Services

Developmental · Line & Copy · Proofreading · Critique & Reader Feedback
Developmental Edit — “The Dissection Table”
$0.04 / word
Big-picture analysis of structure, pacing, and character arcs.
Deliverables: Editorial letter, annotated manuscript (Track Changes), optional 30-min follow-up call.  |  Turnaround: 3–4 Weeks
When you need it: After your first or second draft, before line or copy edits. Strengthens the foundation of your story so every scene works harder.
Copyediting — “The Deep Cut”
$0.03 / word$0.035/word after 80k words
Sentence-level refinement for grammar, clarity, flow, and style.
Deliverables: Edited manuscript (Track Changes), style sheet.  |  Turnaround: 2–3 Weeks
When you need it: After developmental edits, before proofreading. Clean, professional prose keeps readers hooked and builds trust.
Proofreading — “The Final Sweep”
$0.015 / word$0.020/word after 80k words
Final pass to catch typos, punctuation errors, and formatting issues.
Deliverables: Clean manuscript, optional error log.  |  Turnaround: 5–7 Business Days
When you need it: Last step before publication or ARC distribution. Even one typo can pull a reader out of your story — this prevents that.
Sample Edit — “The Final Girl Sampler”
$80 flat
A trial edit (up to 5,000 words) to showcase style and approach.
Deliverables: Edited sample, style notes.  |  Turnaround: 1–2 Weeks
When you need it: Any stage, before committing to a full edit. See exactly how the work will elevate your book before investing in a larger project.
Targeted Micro Edit — “The Blood Spatter Report”
$0.035 / wordsection only
An intensive edit on one specific section or scene.
Deliverables: Edited section, targeted improvement notes.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: Any stage where a key scene needs to shine. Elevates pivotal moments so they land with maximum impact.
Manuscript Critique — “The Full Forensics Report”
$650 flat
An editorial letter outlining strengths, weaknesses, and opportunities — no in-text edits.
Deliverables: Editorial letter (PDF) only.  |  Turnaround: 7–10 Business Days
When you need it: Early stage, when you want direction before deep editing. Gives you clarity and focus before investing in heavier edits.
Beta Reading — “The First Cut”
$0.01 / word
Reader-level feedback on engagement, pacing, and character likability.
Deliverables: Beta reader report.  |  Turnaround: 3–4 Weeks
When you need it: After a solid draft, before final edits. Reveals how your story lands with real readers.
Sensitivity / Authenticity Reading — “The Undercover Operative”
$0.025 / word
Review for accurate, respectful representation.
Deliverables: Feedback report, optional annotated manuscript.  |  Turnaround: 7–10 Business Days
When you need it: After a complete draft, before publication. Protects your reputation and ensures authentic storytelling.
Fact-Checking — “The Truth Serum”
$65 / hour$150 minimum; varies by scope
Verification of factual details in your manuscript.
Deliverables: Fact-check report.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days*
When you need it: Before final edits or publication. Accuracy builds reader trust and avoids credibility issues.
Chapter-by-Chapter Notes — “The Interrogation Files”
$0.002 / wordper chapter, up to avg. length; $0.0025/word beyond
Detailed feedback on pacing, plot, and character development for each chapter.
Deliverables: Chapter notes, overall summary.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: After a complete draft, before major revisions. Gives you a roadmap for targeted, effective rewrites.
First Chapter / First 50 Pages Intensive — “The Opening Statement”
$250 flat
A deep dive into your opening to ensure it hooks.
Deliverables: Annotated manuscript, summary of recommendations.  |  Turnaround: 7–10 Business Days
When you need it: Before querying or ARC distribution. A killer opening keeps agents, publishers, and readers turning pages.
Ghostwriting — “The Silent Partner”
Custom Quote
Writing a book, story, or other content on the author's behalf — based on their ideas, outline, or interviews — while preserving their unique voice.
Deliverables: Completed manuscript or agreed sections, style/voice guide, optional outline or scene list, one revision round.  |  Turnaround: Custom timeline
When you need it: When you have a concept, outline, or partial draft but lack the time, skill, or bandwidth to complete it yourself. Brings your story to life without sacrificing quality or authenticity.

Query, Submission & Marketing Copy

Everything between a finished manuscript and an agent's inbox — or a reader's cart
Query Letter Critique — “The Calling Card”
$75 flat
Feedback and edits to make your query letter stand out.
Deliverables: Edited query letter, feedback notes.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: After your manuscript is polished and ready to pitch. A query letter can make or break your chances — this ensures it's a hook, not a hurdle.
Synopsis Review — “The Confession”
$100 flat
Feedback on clarity, engagement, and industry standards.
Deliverables: Edited synopsis, feedback notes.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: Before querying or submitting to publishers. A strong synopsis proves you can tell a complete, compelling story.
Author Bio — “The Suspect Profile”
$75 flat
Crafting or refining your author bio.
Deliverables: Final bio text, 2–3 alternate versions.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: Any stage, especially before launch. A strong bio builds credibility and connection with readers.
Back Cover Blurb — “The Closing Statement”
$65 flat
A hook-driven, market-ready summary of your book.
Deliverables: Final blurb text, 2–3 alternate versions.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: After your manuscript is finalized, during pre-launch marketing. A compelling blurb sells your book before a reader even opens it.
Blurb / Ad Copy Writing — “The Hook & Hangman”
$100 flat
High-impact copy for ads, promos, or social media.
Deliverables: Final ad copy, 2–3 variations.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: Pre-launch marketing stage. Hooks readers instantly and drives clicks and sales.
Marketing Copy Review — “The Press Release”
$100 flat
Edits and feedback on promotional materials.
Deliverables: Edited marketing copy, feedback notes.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: Pre-launch marketing stage. Ensures your marketing speaks directly to your target audience.

Coaching & Consulting

Ongoing support, brainstorming, and launch strategy
Book Coaching for First Drafts — “The Partner in Crime”
$650 / month
Ongoing guidance, accountability, and feedback while drafting.
Deliverables: Monthly coaching calls, call summaries, milestone check-ins.  |  Turnaround: Ongoing
When you need it: From concept through draft completion. Keeps you on track, motivated, and producing your best work.
Brainstorming Session — “The Plot Twist Consultation”
$100 flatper 45 minutes
A creative session to develop ideas or solve plot problems.
Deliverables: Call summary, idea list.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: Any stage, from concept to revisions. Unlocks fresh ideas and solutions when you're stuck.
Follow-up Consult — “The Debriefing”
$60 / hour
A post-edit or post-launch review and planning session.
Deliverables: Call summary.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: After edits, launch, or a major milestone. Keeps your momentum going and prevents creative stalls.
Hourly Consulting — “The Ticking Timebomb”
$60 / hour
Flexible hourly consulting or editing.
Deliverables: Depends on scope — may include edited sections, notes, or a call summary.  |  Turnaround: 3–5 Business Days
When you need it: Any stage, for quick fixes or guidance. Perfect for targeted help without committing to a full package.
Book Launch Plan Consult — “The Final Countdown”
$200 flat
A strategic session to plan your launch timeline and tactics.
Deliverables: Written launch plan, call summary.  |  Turnaround: 1–2 Weeks
When you need it: 1–3 months before release. A strong launch plan maximizes visibility and sales.

Structural & Reference Tools

Big-picture documents that keep long or multi-book projects airtight
Book Map / Scene List Creation — “The Scene of the Crime”
$200 flat
A detailed breakdown of scenes for structure and pacing.
Deliverables: Scene list, pacing notes.  |  Turnaround: 7–10 Business Days
When you need it: Early or mid-draft, or before revisions. Gives you a bird's-eye view to spot gaps and tighten pacing.
Book Series Bible — “The Chain of Custody”
$500 / book
A master reference for characters, timelines, and world-building.
Deliverables: Series bible document.  |  Turnaround: 1–2 Weeks per book
When you need it: During or after Book 1, before or during sequels. Prevents continuity errors and keeps your series airtight.
Formatting & Style Sheet Creation — “The Forensic File”
$250 flat
Consistent formatting and a full style guide, built for your manuscript.
Deliverables: Formatted manuscript, style sheet.  |  Turnaround: 7–10 Business Days
When you need it: After copyediting, before publication. Ensures a professional, cohesive reading experience.

Bundles

Pair services for a fuller arc of support — priced to reward committing to more of the work
The Prime Suspect Package
$800
“Get them hooked — and get that yes.”
IncludesThe Case Closed Package (query letter, synopsis, first 10 pages) + The Opening Statement (first chapter / first 50 pages intensive).
Best ForQuerying authors who need a killer opening and a submission package that lands.
The Evidence Locker
$500–$800
“Fix the weak spots before they sink your story.”
IncludesThe Full Forensics Report (manuscript critique) + The Blood Spatter Report (targeted micro edit).
Best ForAuthors with a full draft who can't yet commit to a full edit.
The Autopsy Report
$3,500–$6,000
“We'll find the cause of death — and bring your story back to life.”
IncludesThe Dissection Table (developmental edit) + The Opening Statement (first 50 pages line edit) + The Forensic File (style sheet creation).
Best ForAuthors needing a deep structural and style-level overhaul.
The Series Survival Kit
$1,500–$2,500
“Keep your series airtight — from first clue to final twist.”
IncludesThe Chain of Custody (series bible) + The Scene of the Crime (book map / scene list) + The Full Forensics Report (manuscript critique).
Best ForAuthors writing multi-book arcs.
The Mastermind Mentorship
$450–$600 / month
“Plan the perfect crime — one chapter at a time.”
IncludesThe Partner in Crime (monthly coaching) + The Blood Spatter Report (targeted edit, monthly).
Best ForFirst-time or developing authors who want guidance while drafting.
The Perfect Alibi
Custom Quote
“Structurally sound, on-brand, and ready for editing — without writing it alone.”
IncludesThe Silent Partner (ghostwriting) + The Scene of the Crime (book map / scene list) + The Chain of Custody (series bible).
Best ForAuthors with a strong concept who want a complete, professionally written book or series starter.

Policies

The fine print, kept short

Rush Fee

+25–50% of project rate, depending on requested turnaround. Availability is not guaranteed — ask before you assume.

Late Fee

$25 flat, plus 1.5% monthly interest on any balance not paid by the due date.

Bundles & Discounts

Bundle pricing reflects a discount off the sum of individual services — still anchored to a fair working rate, never a race to the bottom.

Every rate above is a starting point for a conversation, not a locked quote.
Ready to talk about your manuscript? — thefinalgirl@finalgirlcollective.com